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• just another dreamer • ([personal profile] evocates) wrote2006-03-16 06:57 pm
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[FIC] GW: Demons

For [livejournal.com profile] cozzybob, because she once said she wanted to read something gory and non-pairing from me. Hope this fills the criteria? ^^

Demons

Character/Pairing: Zechs
Rating: PG-13
Words: 412
Summary: Zechs, and his first encounter with death.


Blood, Zechs thinks, smells of metal.

He can feel the stickiness of it on his feet, even though it was covered by inches of polished leather and cotton. He can smell the blood, thick and cloying, dancing around his nostril and penetrating into his brain. If he just sticks out his tongue, Zechs muses, he can probably taste the blood. Red stains his vision, splattered all over a grey pavement, crimson heat pooling around a cooling body.

His hands aren’t shaking, his gun was held steady between slim fingers. His legs aren’t trembling, they’re steady, steady and unmoving and he’s not going to break down right now. So what if this is the first man he had shot? It wasn’t the first man he had killed, far from it.

But it is different, somehow. It was different in that this man has a face and Zechs can imagine his family, perhaps a wife and daughters? Sons? Does this man’s daughter look like Zechs’s little sister? Does his son look like Mill…Zechs? He has blonde hair, blonde hair streaked with grey and red and black and gods, is blood supposed to congeal this fast?

His heartbeat is roaring within his ears and he can’t hear anything else. The commander is shouting an order, he should listen to it. He should listen to orders and get away from this body that used to be a man who possibly had a wife and a son and a daughter. He should get away right now, stop thinking about the blood and there’s a hole in his chest.

I made that hole.


Zechs doesn’t know how he managed to move again, half-running, half-stumbling, towards the helicopter taking them back to headquarters. His eyes are wide, blue stark against a pale face, black sunglasses contrasting with his ash-white lips. He trips over himself, shaking hands holding the snub-nose pistol in his hand like a vice. Metal cuts into his hands, but there is no blood, and so he is fine.

The mission isn’t supposed to go this way. Nobody is supposed to die. Nobody. The man’s death at your hands, your own hands was a fluke, something that shouldn’t have happened but did anyway. It shouldn’t have happened, and so it didn’t. It didn’t happen.

I didn’t kill a man face to face. I didn’t.

I didn’t.


At night, huddled in his dorm and curled up in his bed Zechs dreams of blood and a monster with white-blonde hair.

End

[identity profile] lightningbaron6.livejournal.com 2006-03-16 11:49 am (UTC)(link)
Creepy, but in a good way. Very nicely done; I don't often see well-done first kill fics for Zechs. *applauds*

[identity profile] evocates.livejournal.com 2006-03-16 06:50 pm (UTC)(link)
Thank you! It's supposed to be creepy, so I'm glad it kind of serves that purpose. ^^

Hughes/Roy is love. MUCH LOVE. And I am a bad, bad person for not writing them. XD

[identity profile] animethief92.livejournal.com 2006-03-16 01:52 pm (UTC)(link)
This is a really good Zechs type of fic!

[identity profile] evocates.livejournal.com 2006-03-16 06:50 pm (UTC)(link)
Thank you! =D

[identity profile] ryttu3k.livejournal.com 2006-03-16 02:22 pm (UTC)(link)
Iyahh! Poor Zechs :( *pets the poor traumatised boy*

[identity profile] evocates.livejournal.com 2006-03-16 06:51 pm (UTC)(link)
He gets better, really. After Treize comforts him and washes the damn blood away, and then give him a red uniform to serve as a reminder and I think too much about this yes.

[identity profile] ryttu3k.livejournal.com 2006-03-16 09:31 pm (UTC)(link)
But what about the comfort sex? Dude, there has to be comfort sex!

[identity profile] evocates.livejournal.com 2006-03-17 05:39 am (UTC)(link)
Zechs is around... 14 in this. UNDERAGED, YO. Therefore no comfort sex. Not yet, anyway. Ahahaha? XD

[identity profile] ryttu3k.livejournal.com 2006-03-17 08:54 am (UTC)(link)
Okay, underaged comfort sex bad. We'll wait until he's legal ^_~

[identity profile] kangaekaeru.livejournal.com 2006-03-16 11:51 pm (UTC)(link)
Nicely creepy. I think you should do a follow-up. ^^

[identity profile] evocates.livejournal.com 2006-03-17 05:40 am (UTC)(link)
Perhaps~ It all depends on what the muses say. I am bad at the 'hurt/comfort' thing. XD

[identity profile] xero-sky.livejournal.com 2006-03-16 02:49 pm (UTC)(link)
Very nice! Poor Zechs and his father-fixation...

[identity profile] evocates.livejournal.com 2006-03-16 06:52 pm (UTC)(link)
I'm glad you caught that. Zechs does have a slight obsession over his father, especially the whole 'failing' thing. >>;

Thank you!

[identity profile] arabianprincess.livejournal.com 2006-03-16 04:26 pm (UTC)(link)
Ooh! Very good! Poor Zechs...

[identity profile] evocates.livejournal.com 2006-03-16 06:52 pm (UTC)(link)
Thank you! ^^

[identity profile] ex-cozzybob450.livejournal.com 2006-03-17 05:43 am (UTC)(link)
THANK YOU SO MUCH, YOU DAMNED TALENTED WOMAN, YOU!

I needed to be cheered up. Especially after reading the news. You cheered me up. Nothing like Zechs and gore and perfect angst and omg those were daddy issues and *squealie*

THANK YOU! THANK YOU! Seriously. Thank you. You have no idea how happy you made me. Bad day, bad week, oh god I really needed this. Thank you so much. Thanks! *incoherent*

[identity profile] evocates.livejournal.com 2006-03-17 05:51 am (UTC)(link)
YOU'RE WELCOME, AND YOUR TALENT OWNS MY NONEXISTANT ONE ANY DAY!

The news? You mean the one on Bush? ... Yes, I can see how people needs cheering up after that. Being proactive is all fine and good, damnit, but. BUT NOT WHEN MAKING WAR. YOU DO NOT MAKE THE FIRST MOVE IN WAR BECAUSE IF YOU DO, YOU FRICKKING START THE DAMN WAR.

-cough-

The daddy-issues came all by themselves, but it fits Zechs to the tee and I'm so glad I cheered you up! ^^ -hugs-

YOU'RE WELCOME, YOU'RE WELCOME! -hugs again- Incoherency means my job is done! XD

[identity profile] ex-cozzybob450.livejournal.com 2006-03-17 06:07 am (UTC)(link)
Your job is definately done! I'm still wibbly, bouncing around the room and THANK YOU I LOVE YOU SO MUCH and seriously you ROCK and *tackles*

Your nonexistant talent owns my talented soul! xD

Yes, I meant the thing on Bush. Is that not the worst thing he could have done? Is that not insane? We have an idiot on office. *hates*

Thank you so much. Thank you! Thank you! *tackles harder*

[identity profile] evocates.livejournal.com 2006-03-17 06:24 am (UTC)(link)
Ack! -is tackled-

He's... fucked up in the head. Mister, people are glad you're bein proactive, BUT NOT LIKE THIS, DAMNIT. It's as if he wants to quit the office and take the whole country down with him. WTF, BUSH.

I'm not from America, and therefore I console you for being an American citizen. The stupidity from there, from the world in general, is rising. WHERE IS DARWIN WHEN YOU NEED HIM, DAMNIT.

-glomphugs back- You're still welcome! ^^

[identity profile] flamesword.livejournal.com 2006-03-18 04:45 pm (UTC)(link)
Here from Cozz and whoa.... very nice... hmm, now all the nebulous lingering Zechs-angst story ideas I had are floating back to poke at me again. ♥ I haven't written GW fic in forever, though. :-/

[identity profile] evocates.livejournal.com 2006-03-18 06:07 pm (UTC)(link)
Hee! Thank you! Hearing that I inspired plotbunnies to come back to life just makes me smile. XD

I'll love to see anything you write. ^^

[identity profile] flamesword.livejournal.com 2006-03-18 06:11 pm (UTC)(link)
XD Don't hold your breath--the last time I was writing GW anything was nearly a year ago. I still have several GW fics on my to-write list, but they get bumped on a regular basis. >>;