I really admire the fact that you know what you're looking for in fics. And anonymity aside... you're pretty direct in what you say and your words have got me thinking about my own writing too *A* The depth and meaning of metaphors... what makes them comprehensible to everyone? What makes it possible for authors to share their concepts with people who share the same thinking processes... and different processes? How far can omniscient narration push theme and metaphors?
Anon. I would be incredibly happy and indebted to you if you would lend some of your time to read even a bit of my writing. Rip everything to shreds with no mercy. Put it into the blender that is your mind and spit everything out at me, I beg you! I don't mind if you stay anon <33
"Spin" and "Unrequited Animosity" are my best Dino/Hibari fics. "Scramble" is Hibari vs. Gokudera and kinda turns into Hibari/Gokudera. It has the heaviest descriptive language by far... and is the longest fic I've ever written in that style. Also most violent. "Licking Wounds and Nursing Egos" Xanxus/Squalo. Um I've got a lot of positive comments on this which sort of worries me haha!
If anon could review even one fic... I'd be extremely grateful ;_; <3 I WANT TO IMPROVE MY WRITING LIKE BURNINGGG.
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I really admire the fact that you know what you're looking for in fics. And anonymity aside... you're pretty direct in what you say and your words have got me thinking about my own writing too *A* The depth and meaning of metaphors... what makes them comprehensible to everyone? What makes it possible for authors to share their concepts with people who share the same thinking processes... and different processes? How far can omniscient narration push theme and metaphors?
Anon. I would be incredibly happy and indebted to you if you would lend some of your time to read even a bit of my writing. Rip everything to shreds with no mercy. Put it into the blender that is your mind and spit everything out at me, I beg you! I don't mind if you stay anon <33
"Spin" and "Unrequited Animosity" are my best Dino/Hibari fics.
"Scramble" is Hibari vs. Gokudera and kinda turns into Hibari/Gokudera. It has the heaviest descriptive language by far... and is the longest fic I've ever written in that style. Also most violent.
"Licking Wounds and Nursing Egos" Xanxus/Squalo. Um I've got a lot of positive comments on this which sort of worries me haha!
If anon could review even one fic... I'd be extremely grateful ;_; <3 I WANT TO IMPROVE MY WRITING LIKE BURNINGGG.
love, spart.