evocates: (Ouran: Tamaki/Kyouya - Save a life)
• just another dreamer • ([personal profile] evocates) wrote2008-10-13 11:05 pm
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[FIC] Ouran: Symphony Romantica

THIS IS GEN. ENTIRELY GEN.

Finally. Lollll Kyouya-muse, you are really fail. Tamaki can do it why can't youuuu. xDD

Symphony Romantica

Characters/Pairings:
Tamaki
Rating: G
Words: 510
Summary: [livejournal.com profile] 31_days prompt: October 13 – “fool for love”. Tamaki is a fool, but he is a fool who loves, who believes, with all of his too-large heart. “Sometimes he plays songs of love unrequited, love unanswered, of a man dancing alone with his hands held outwards, frozen in the air.”


There are many, many songs about love, and Tamaki knows them all. He sings them under his breath, lilting and somewhat off-tune, songs of his heart and soul; he plays them on ivory keys, fingers dancing their own waltz on the white-and-black floor.

Sometimes he sings of tragedies, of star-crossed lovers spread across the sky like constellations, reaching out for each other but only managing once a year, when the doves trill and make a white-grey bridge across the sky. Sometimes he plays songs of love unrequited, love unanswered, of a man dancing alone with his hands held outwards, frozen in the air. Sometimes his voice carries the stories speaking of the emptiness that a lover leaves behind when they go, like a gaping void in one’s heart and breaths choked in the throat.

But most of all he sings of happy endings, of fairy tales and of glorious stories of the princes rescuing princesses. He believes in the happy ending, and though he knows there are sad stories, he much, much prefers the happier ones. Tamaki is an optimist, a romantic; he likes seeing the strengths and the good of the people and blinds himself to the rest. He is a dreamer; Tamaki soars up on the sky and marvels at the world below, inhaling the air that is beauty embodied, sweet and cool. Perhaps that’s what makes him so beautiful, he thinks, and giggles at his own vanity.

It is happy endings that he lives for and believes in, wholly and truly with all of his romantic’s heart. He likes to laugh more than he likes to cry; he loves to smile and make others smile. So it is so much easier to simply see the beauty and joy of life, to bring bright light into the darkness so he won’t ever break down and cry. He had given Mother his word, and a man – though he is just a boy, only a boy, barely broken out of his shell – does not break his word.

Thus Tamaki gives love freely and easily, like a sun with sunlight. He cares for and adores and loves almost everything, plying everyone he comes across with affection and hope pure and bright as winter’s first snow. He stumbles over his own feet sometimes, caught by his own kindness, but there will always be others around him, holding him and supporting him, buoying him up. Even if he trips, there are many, many hands extended towards him that he can choose from. He always tries to take them all.

Those who love will always be loved in return, Tamaki knows. As long as he keeps on believing, as long as he keeps loving, one day the world will realize and turn to him, giving him a smile, open and beautiful like the sun breaking behind clouds after a heavy storm. Then he will be accepted back into the world of warm arms, joyful smiles, and kisses pressed into his hair.

If you believe deeply enough about happy endings, you will find your own.

End

[identity profile] daigranon.livejournal.com 2008-10-13 03:52 pm (UTC)(link)
Aw, this made me feel all warm inside-really! What a wonderful take on Tamaki, I like your style.

[identity profile] evocates.livejournal.com 2008-10-15 10:56 am (UTC)(link)
Thank you so much! ♥

[identity profile] daigranon.livejournal.com 2008-10-15 11:15 am (UTC)(link)
Welcome... I love your icon =]

[identity profile] sciathan-file.livejournal.com 2008-10-13 05:51 pm (UTC)(link)
GEN. OMG IT'S GEN. FROM YOU. GEN.

*over shock*

:D TAMAKI~~! *Hug*

This is why I don't make comments when I've just woken up.

<3 <3 <3 <3 <3

[identity profile] evocates.livejournal.com 2008-10-15 10:57 am (UTC)(link)
YES, YES IT IS. LOOK, NOT A MENTION OF TAMAKYOU IN SIGHT. ISN'T IT AMAZING. LOL CAN'T YOU DO THE SAME, KYOUYA-MUSE.

-Tamaki-muse hugs back <3-

Don't worry, it's just fiiiine. ilu Sci~~~ ♥♥♥

[identity profile] wissiemeissie.livejournal.com 2008-10-13 07:17 pm (UTC)(link)
All your fic brings joy to my fragile little heart. :D I especially love how you can look at this one way, and it's happy, but then you see it in a whole other way and it's suddenly depressing. And ohh, the Tamaki = sun simile, and his deep-rooted faith in love that's so deep it actually feels like knowledge but most of all -

a man dancing alone with his hands held outwards, frozen in the air
This hit me so hard. It's so vivid, and so sad and so pretty.

So, yay! Thanks for brightening my evening with this! :D God knows it's loads more fun to read about Tamaki being love's poster child than to translate Old English. ;D

[identity profile] evocates.livejournal.com 2008-10-15 10:59 am (UTC)(link)
Oh? Tell me how did you find it depressing? Because I totally didn't intend that at all. xD And yes, Tamaki is a romantic to the core - it's what makes his character so pure and beautiful and great, really. I wish there are people like him in real life.

It's the first image that hit me when I wrote this. xD Thank you!!

Hahahha yes! Oh god, Old English? Poor you. =X

♥ Thank you for commenting!

[identity profile] maajna.livejournal.com 2008-10-13 08:29 pm (UTC)(link)
So sweet, and so very Tamaki-esque. I'm really, really fond of the "man dancing alone with his hands held outwards" line as well --it caught my heart. It's such a poignant image.

Now I'm all warmed inside! I want to find a happy ending too (obviously inspired with little difficulty). Thanks for sharing, this was truly well done.

[identity profile] maajna.livejournal.com 2008-10-13 08:29 pm (UTC)(link)
P.S.

Please work, Kyouya-muse!! I'm cheering for you.

[identity profile] evocates.livejournal.com 2008-10-15 10:59 am (UTC)(link)
Kyouya-muse is unable to talk without mentioning Tamaki somewhere. It's terribly annoying. Which is why I can only write almost-gen UNTIL NOW. Oh godddd why, Kyouya, WHY?

That image seems to be a crowd favourite. =D Thank you so much! ♥

[identity profile] coastal-spirit.livejournal.com 2008-10-13 08:50 pm (UTC)(link)
This is beautiful, and really captures the essence of Tamaki. It makes me want to cry and soar at the same time. Brava!

[identity profile] evocates.livejournal.com 2008-10-15 11:00 am (UTC)(link)
Why does it want to make your cry? Because I didn't intend this to be a sad piece - it's supposed to be beautiful and hopeful and just a little too bright because that's Tamaki to the core. xD I'm curious - tell me? xD

Thank you~~ ♥

[identity profile] coastal-spirit.livejournal.com 2008-10-19 05:06 pm (UTC)(link)
I didn't intend this to be a sad piece - it's supposed to be beautiful and hopeful and just a little too bright because that's Tamaki to the core.

Yes! And that's why it brings me to tears; because Tamaki, despite everything, carries this hope and light within him and rarely, if ever, lets it get him down. He's just so dear, and that touches me.

So it is so much easier to simply see the beauty and joy of life, to bring bright light into the darkness so he won’t ever break down and cry. He had given Mother his word, and a man – though he is just a boy, only a boy, barely broken out of his shell – does not break his word.

This line just destroyed me ... *sniffles*
Edited 2008-10-19 17:06 (UTC)

[identity profile] tyreling.livejournal.com 2008-10-13 09:48 pm (UTC)(link)
Wow. This is really beautiful. I'm really impressed with the way you described Tamaki here, so wistful, so glamourous and such a romantic! And something more, which I can't quite grasp, but it's still pretty. *_*

[identity profile] evocates.livejournal.com 2008-10-15 11:01 am (UTC)(link)
And yes, Tamaki is wistful and beautiful and romantic. He's such a romantic that he's really 'love's poster child'. xD

Thank you! ♥

[identity profile] moonyka.livejournal.com 2008-10-13 11:27 pm (UTC)(link)
IT's amazing, really. How you could put on Tamaki's skin and write about him, it's really great. The end was what kills me: amazing.

[identity profile] evocates.livejournal.com 2008-10-15 11:02 am (UTC)(link)
Mmr, Tamaki has been living in my head for two years. xD I used to write TamaKyou so much, lol. xDDD

Thank you! ♥

[identity profile] meow-786.livejournal.com 2008-10-14 02:03 am (UTC)(link)
This is beautiful! I love it!

[identity profile] evocates.livejournal.com 2008-10-15 11:01 am (UTC)(link)
Thank you! ♥

[identity profile] winternightz.livejournal.com 2008-10-14 07:49 am (UTC)(link)
I have been on this community for a good long while now, and I've never ever clicked a link for a fic, but your teaser line intrigued me so much.

This was amazingly beautiful. It really shows what it's like to be a hopeless romantic, and one with enough love to never stop smiling and laughing and loving. Beautiful, thank you so much! I love it. I wish I could wrap myself up in the words and cuddle with them, imagining they're a gift from a far off beloved.

[identity profile] evocates.livejournal.com 2008-10-15 11:04 am (UTC)(link)
setsdfdas THAT is one of the best compliments I've ever received. Thank you. Really, thank you so much.

Well, I don't think the words can hug you, but here, have one from me anyway. -hugs- ♥

[identity profile] laurus-nobilis.livejournal.com 2008-10-14 01:55 pm (UTC)(link)
Ooooh, this is wonderful. And so very... Tamaki. You've really captured his personality here, how he's so happy and bright in spite of all the reasons he has not to be.

[identity profile] evocates.livejournal.com 2008-10-15 11:03 am (UTC)(link)
-nodnodnod- PRECISELY. Tamaki is so hopeful and optimistic and happy despite his past, and that's what really grabs me about him, really. So I'm really glad that I managed to convey that!

Thank you! ♥

[identity profile] treeflamingo.livejournal.com 2008-10-14 05:13 pm (UTC)(link)
Pretty much everyone else has said this already, but: Sometimes he plays songs of love unrequited, love unanswered, of a man dancing alone with his hands held outwards, frozen in the air. That is an achingly beautiful line. *bows*

Also: Even if he trips, there are many, many hands extended towards him that he can choose from. He always tries to take them all. Almost makes me want to cry. Why is that? I do not know.

This whole ficlet is just so excruciatingly hopeful. It's what's so heartbreaking about Tamaki. It's lovely. Thank you.

Ah, and finally: stories of the emptiness of that a lover left behind when they leave I think there's an extra word in here?

[identity profile] evocates.livejournal.com 2008-10-15 11:10 am (UTC)(link)
Your icon made me laugh out loud. xDD And, um, -fixes like ninja yes!-

And yes, that line is a crowd favourite, it seems. It's really the first line that popped into my head when I saw the prompt, and the rest just came from it somehow. xD Thank you!

I seem to make many people want to cry with this, really! I don't know why, because I honestly didn't intend that at all. This is supposed to be a happy, sappy gen fic. zdfsdg Oh Tamaki, you continue to surprise me.

He's really someone too good to be true; the proverbial sun, honestly. I love this boy so.

Thank you! -bows back- ♥

[identity profile] octopus.livejournal.com 2008-10-15 03:58 am (UTC)(link)
Just thought you might like to know that you're all that's tying me to this fandom right now. Your stories are the proverbial weight to the balloon that is fandom.

You say that you write Tamaki easily, and I am in awe that something so incredible could come as simple as you make it sound.
<3

[identity profile] evocates.livejournal.com 2008-10-15 11:07 am (UTC)(link)
Hahhaha oh god I barely read anything from this fandom nowadays. I'm terrified for it really, with it being dubbed and being on Adult Swim,, and the incoming swarm of fanbrats. I really just read from a very selective few authors, nowadays. xD

I suppose it comes with the ease of long practice and a wee bit of wistful thinking, really. Tamaki, I feel, is really a wonderful person. He's so beautiful, inside and outside and honestly I can see why Kyouya fell for him he's one of best characters I've seen. I try to put myself in his shoes, and well, I'm really glad it worked. ^^

Thank you! ♥♥♥♥

[identity profile] rosichan.livejournal.com 2008-10-15 08:03 pm (UTC)(link)
Wow... I couldn't help writing a comment... this so beautiful... and really Tamaki-ish...
I got moved somehow... i don't know why... it's just, Tamaki's personality, his strength... makes me feel this way sometimes... and you got it so well !!
Thank you for this ff <3 I'm a Tamaki lover 100% and I'm always happy to read good ffs about him... and it's so rare(very very very very rare) to find writers out there who can write Tamaki properly...

[identity profile] evocates.livejournal.com 2008-10-16 12:46 pm (UTC)(link)
Thank you so much! ♥♥ Yes, Tamaki is very difficult to write sometimes, because it's a balance between the optimistic and romanticism, and the idiocy and obliviousness. Sometimes it's hard to find it. ^^ So I'm really happy that you think I succeeded. =D

[identity profile] arthoniel.livejournal.com 2008-10-17 12:06 am (UTC)(link)
AWWWWW!!! So adorable, and so perfect for Tamaki- I love it!! :D

[identity profile] evocates.livejournal.com 2008-10-17 06:25 am (UTC)(link)
Thank you~ ♥

[identity profile] shafted-artist.livejournal.com 2008-10-20 04:06 am (UTC)(link)
Perhaps that’s what makes him so beautiful, he thinks, and giggles at his own vanity.

Haha, that is so Tamaki! Very nicely done piece overall =D

[identity profile] evocates.livejournal.com 2008-10-23 08:13 am (UTC)(link)
Haha, he's such a silly boy, isn't he?

Thank you! ♥