Whew, fans self and reaches for coffeepot again. Oh wow.
Wicked... Go through all those cold empty rooms with VIgs - no Bean... and there's nothing emptier than that sort of empty room!!!!!!!! And all the time breath getting shorter and shorter, tighter. Oh VIGS.. and the photo, sliced. That is SICK stuff. sick sick.
Find Sean, alive, and then the body saying he must introduce himself.... and YOU LEAVE US NOT KNOWING!
shift to Viggo again fighting panics. (And I'm sure Vigs would panic, he lives on nerves so much) and to put himself into his parts to restrain the panic which almost works.
And the girl - beautifully written. Could almost tell you what she'd be wearing. A citysharp girl, but goodhearted. Clever girl, hesitant but not closing off. super.
As for the ghastly Ethan. Where did he come from? I hate that name for some strange reason. And Sean does have a new neighbour! Oh lord. I don't have pics of Sean all over my rooms... just my PC. How scary can that get to someone who knows they're the object of such fan-passions?
The descriptions of fighting the drug... oh lor. Trying to come round from anaesthetics... Poor Sean. and Viggo.. the mind still piping up with RL 'this isn't the movies' thoughts. And both of them knowing they actually aren't any good at proper fighting or self-defence except just welting/kicking out.
And the explanation as to why the police were there... NOT movies again! Just a l'il ole report of an intruder. Perfect.
Whew. and then we have Sean in hospital bed, and hospital gown.(open at the back of course) being sooooo gorgeous again. And... aaaaah
Oh the ending. I love Sean's remark about Ranuccio. One perfectly well understands what he means there. Meeeeeep.
This wasn't half a cliffhanger. From the first line to the last it was gripping. scary. sweatmaking. Breath-holding.
And I promise I won't stalk the poor darlings any more. (Tho I'm not as scary as Ethan, but one does feel a bit guilty!)
Thanks so much Evo. Now I can enjoy the weekends posts!
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Wicked... Go through all those cold empty rooms with VIgs - no Bean... and there's nothing emptier than that sort of empty room!!!!!!!! And all the time breath getting shorter and shorter, tighter. Oh VIGS.. and the photo, sliced. That is SICK stuff. sick sick.
Find Sean, alive, and then the body saying he must introduce himself.... and YOU LEAVE US NOT KNOWING!
shift to Viggo again fighting panics. (And I'm sure Vigs would panic, he lives on nerves so much) and to put himself into his parts to restrain the panic which almost works.
And the girl - beautifully written. Could almost tell you what she'd be wearing. A citysharp girl, but goodhearted. Clever girl, hesitant but not closing off. super.
As for the ghastly Ethan. Where did he come from? I hate that name for some strange reason. And Sean does have a new neighbour! Oh lord. I don't have pics of Sean all over my rooms... just my PC. How scary can that get to someone who knows they're the object of such fan-passions?
The descriptions of fighting the drug... oh lor. Trying to come round from anaesthetics... Poor Sean. and Viggo.. the mind still piping up with RL 'this isn't the movies' thoughts. And both of them knowing they actually aren't any good at proper fighting or self-defence except just welting/kicking out.
And the explanation as to why the police were there... NOT movies again! Just a l'il ole report of an intruder. Perfect.
Whew. and then we have Sean in hospital bed, and hospital gown.(open at the back of course) being sooooo gorgeous again. And... aaaaah
Oh the ending. I love Sean's remark about Ranuccio. One perfectly well understands what he means there. Meeeeeep.
This wasn't half a cliffhanger. From the first line to the last it was gripping. scary. sweatmaking. Breath-holding.
And I promise I won't stalk the poor darlings any more.
(Tho I'm not as scary as Ethan, but one does feel a bit guilty!)
Thanks so much Evo. Now I can enjoy the weekends posts!