"“Oh, aye,” Sean’s laughter was broken up by his panting. “You did a good job with that. I might just keep you.”"

It's great that there's still banter between them even though they're going through a dark patch.

The 'stalker fan' must be the most horrific fear of any actor and I think you've caught the "want to know / don't want to know" dichotomy very well.

I liked the definite preferences they had over the sex - Viggo asking the question about topping and Sean being very determined to be on the bottom, just to suit his mood.

Looking forward to more.